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@yb
Looking for constructive feedback on this post I wrote: https://tbp.tech/american-dynamism 5 USDC for every point of meaningful feedback up to 25 USDC. Can't just be something like "could have been more concise" - needs to have proper reasoning. 12/01/23 @bountybot
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kagami 🎩
@kagami
a few notes mostly because i admire your dedication to writing: - consider starting this with a hook that answers “why should the reader care?” - same goes for your preview - in your fav company section, share why you’re so excited one question: what did you want me, as the reader, to come away with?
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@yb
Appreciate the feedback @kagami! Seems like the takeaway is that I need to be more clear & direct about the purpose of the post. I like the framing of "why should the reader care?" - going to try asking that before I get started on the writing. On the fav company section, I think I just got lazy haha but I agree.
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@kagami
“why should the reader care” is like the north star for me when writing. it’s super helpful for keeping you focused when creating your outline and ultimately writing your post. i always get lazy towards the end of writing a post. always hard to push that last 10% to the finish line!
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