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Looking for constructive feedback on this post I wrote: https://tbp.tech/american-dynamism

5 USDC for every point of meaningful feedback up to 25 USDC. Can't just be something like "could have been more concise" - needs to have proper reasoning.

12/01/23

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A few months ago, I casted "will pay anyone $5 for feedback on my writing" and @linda was the only person who responded.

And yesterday, I made a bounty and <24 hours got incredible feedback from 6 people.

Was my first time using bountycaster and def had a good experience. I'll try something else next week.

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This is awesome feedback, really appreciate you taking the time to write out your thoughts Mark! Will DM you for bounty payment

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Love this, thanks so much for writing up the thoughtful feedback 🙏 

Will send over the usdc asap

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I'm not sure I have anything constructive to offer right now. It's been a long day. But I just wanted to drop a note to say I really admire this approach to gathering criticism. I think it shows a lotta courage and a lotta heart.

Glad you enjoyed it.

And that's interesting, when doing the post I thought the opposite. If I'm just summarizing the takeaways, then it could just be a tweet/cast.

But it's a good callout that you felt that - maybe I was just verbose and could have trimmed it down.

Enjoyed the article

It may be biting off too much 

I think a great article would briefly expanding the principles from the speech, and also section 4 to discuss what's uniquely representative about those selected businesses 

Is it waking up the incumbents, applying tech to sectors not seen before, something else?

crypto pm @ sp-ce | building ui/ux for the masses for companies like wormhole, pyth, and zksync 

Appreciate the feedback @kagami!

Seems like the takeaway is that I need to be more clear & direct about the purpose of the post.

I like the framing of "why should the reader care?" - going to try asking that before I get started on the writing.

On the fav company section, I think I just got lazy haha but I agree.

a few notes mostly because i admire your dedication to writing: 

- consider starting this with a hook that answers “why should the reader care?” 
- same goes for your preview 
- in your fav company section, share why you’re so excited

one question: what did you want me, as the reader, to come away with?

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Yea I just assumed it was mostly defense oriented but it’s just 1 of the 10 categories surprisingly

not commenting for the bounty, but it’s great to see the following line:

“Turns out, military is just one sliver of their focus.”

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https://chat.openai.com/share/14e8cf81-cb75-4fe2-b45a-3e2ebc6ab132

You should consider reinforcing your points with specific examples or case studies from the essays and podcasts you've explored. This could make your argument more tangible for readers who may not be familiar with the intricacies of the American Dynamism initiative.