zond
@zond
Just for farcaster, I'm working on a small landing page for my art. I plan on minting soon! I'd love to hear some feedback on how this feels, and what you as a collector/curator/enjooyer of gen art would like to see/read more of! https://i.imgur.com/T1lCyST.png
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zond
@zond
Please keep this on farcaster for now 🙏 https://i.imgur.com/lKpqJGL.jpg
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zond
@zond
Alt header, based on some of the feedback in this thread and on my twitter circle. cc @sdv.eth @benjamin https://i.imgur.com/jPUbAAj.jpg
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Albert Purnama
@app
Feels like there’s too much sentences there. Landing page generally are for getting people to do a certain action, in your case, to mint. So maybe focus on that. And showcase some of the arts!
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Steve
@sdv.eth
I would move organic to the next like with machine, just so it’s not orphaned. Up the contrast a bit by darkening the background. Increase p line-height by maybe 20-50%? Reduce p width to about 70ch, or I guess -25%? Besides those nitpicks, I really dig the look and feel!
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Juan and Only
@juan
This is really cool! Have you worked on other projects?
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Goksu Toprak
@gt
Showcasing one of the pieces at the top of the landing page instead of all showing later after a scroll could be more engaging. Also a link to bird app on the top right looks lonely, maybe also add a link to your Farcaster profile. 😄
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Salief
@salief
First sentence of the artist statement has a small typo, “an year…”
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Gabe
@gabewise
Lfg! Excited to see a novel perspective on gen art and why file format helps realize that
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Benjamin
@benjamin
Artwork is super cool — namely because they’re SVGs that looks like oil / organic work. Samples also have a nice balance to them, both composition and color wise (as well as feeling cohesive as a collection)
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