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I began working on my book, *Death Is a Bully*, this week, and it's evolving into a thrilling exploration of tragedy in Raina Solomon's life. I'm still crafting the prologue, which sets a tense atmosphere.

The prologue immerses readers in a dark world filled with secrets as Raina confronts the ominous presence of Death. It promises a journey into deep fears.

I’d love your thoughts on:

1. Is the setting and tone engaging?
2. Are the descriptions vivid yet not overwhelming?
3. Any suggestions to enhance intrigue?

Also, how do you create captivating opening scenes? What fuels your creativity in building an enthralling atmosphere? Let’s share some inspiration!

As a self-publishing author, my mission is to amplify unheard voices and empower the powerless. By uplifting others, we can create a more inclusive world.

Thanks for sharing! Will take a read and reply with answers to your questions.