First Draft Club

This is whatever draft comes before first. 

Goal: develop a fictional voice again.

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I used to be deep into creating new voices on the fly back when I had time to write. 

Today the inspiration was “it’s 11PM and your first draft is due” 😄

First time I’ve ever read anything from you, but I definitely got fictional vibes from this draft. 

Was there an inspiration?

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Read this in Mathew Mcconaughey’s voice and it will make so much more sense.

I certainly had to read him quite a bit as an English major. 

I haven't circled back in years, though. Will sign up when firstdraftclub becomes Book Club

first reader here! does read like start of a fiction. do u like william faulkner?

I'm a cheerful dubu mom who adores travel, all things pretty, cute stuff, and laughter-filled moments🐻‍❄️💗

Love the flow and introspection here. The idea of 'not thinking' as a break from stress really hits home. Looking forward to more!

"they remind me of new creaks in my knees" is a great line. 

and the soot analogy is clever. 

Seems like in your draft 0 to me that's the 2 things that stand out for a fictional voice. 👊

I love this, thank you for sharing, do you by chance read Morgan Harper