Colin Johnson ðŸ’
@cojo.eth
Finally published a personal website! It took ~5 hours w/ Squarespace and was relatively painless. I’d love feedback (especially critical) if anyone’s got expertise/thoughts 🤌 https://colinjohnson.io
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bradq
@bradq
I like the simple and clean look. Overall feel is great. I love the banner image, but it's a little strange that it seems like a 15-year-old kid...probably nothing you can do about that, but I love the actual stuff in the image and the look... I have 3 suggestions...
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bradq
@bradq
1) "Currently working on Freeport" isn't that informative for the most critical spot for us to know you in 5 seconds. I assume it may change when you are doing something else.
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@bradq
For now, it could be like "Making fine art investing simple for _________ (who's your niche) by building Freeport" getting that in the bigger, #1 slot. Or it could be something rephrased or worded more vividly. I think that slot should tell me clearly what you do in 5 seconds...
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bradq
@bradq
2) I like the attempted bio, but it's a bit cold and a little too uninteresting. Could you make it a bit more personal, with a little more story feel to it?
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@bradq
Hey, I'm Colin. (is great). I live in Atlanta with my wife and 2 kids. When I'm not eating a hot chicken sandwich or watching a Braves game with my son, I'm building Freeport. I grew to love fine art by __________ and now I want to make it simple for others to invest in via new technology so I'm building.
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