Finally published a personal website! It took ~5 hours w/ Squarespace and was relatively painless. 

I’d love feedback (especially critical) if anyone’s got expertise/thoughts 🤌

https://colinjohnson.io

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I like the simple and clean look. Overall feel is great. I love the banner image, but it's a little strange that it seems like a 15-year-old kid...probably nothing you can do about that, but I love the actual stuff in the image and the look... I have 3 suggestions...

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For now, it could be like "Making fine art investing simple for _________ (who's your niche) by building Freeport" getting that in the bigger, #1 slot. Or it could be something rephrased or worded more vividly. I think that slot should tell me clearly what you do in 5 seconds...

2) I like the attempted bio, but it's a bit cold and a little too uninteresting. Could you make it a bit more personal, with a little more story feel to it?

Hey, I'm Colin. (is great). I live in Atlanta with my wife and 2 kids. When I'm not eating a hot chicken sandwich or watching a Braves game with my son, I'm building Freeport. I grew to love fine art by __________ and now I want to make it simple for others to invest in via new technology so I'm building.

3) What's your call to action? Contact you? Read something? What? Put a button in a different color on the bottom right of the picture that stands out and link to your CTA

But I like the site....just taking your call for feedback seriously.

Followed you on Twitter if you want to DM with questions.

1) "Currently working on Freeport" isn't that informative for the most critical spot for us to know you in 5 seconds. I assume it may change when you are doing something else.

If you’re doing suggestions-as-a-service, I’d love your feedback on mine:

☕️📱🧗🏼🇨🇦 - http://murdo.xyz/

Biz Ops @ Shopify

I assume there's a reason you are going with no visuals. I think it needs a visual, but leaving that aside....I think you need a killer line to open up your bio. Your opening paragraph is vague and won't supply that killer line. What's makes you and your work different from everyone else?

If you’re doing suggestions-as-a-service, I’d love your feedback on mine: https://murdo.xyz/