trpplffct

Here’s my highku

Soft breeze, warm and light,
Clouds drift slow in sky, so bright.
Time just fades away,
Lying here with ease, no fight.
No worries, just peace,
The world moves, but I stay still.

#creativepower9

Music artist, building on base, content creator,animator

Nice one. I like the messaging. But it's not really a highku. A highku has 6 lines and the syllable count per line is 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 and 7. You have 5 lines and a syllable count of 7, 5, 7, 5, 7.

The point of the exercise is to work within the restriction given.

A teller / of stories, that is me. / Curious to learn new ways to see. / Proud dad of two. Now, what / about you? | Builds https://paragraph.xyz/@trpplffct

Ok
I’ll do it again thanks for the correction