Hey photography, I'd love to get your thoughts on my photos and how I can get them better

Sharing a few more in the comments

@drivenbyboredom can you help take better photos of people in spontaneous moments? It's one of my favourite things in life, and I'd like to get better at it

The first one is great, the second one I don't love the composition but it seems like a decent candid. The best way to get better is to just shoot constantly. Also recommend shooting all manual at least some of the time so you slow down and think about what you are doing even in situations where people are moving.