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Callum Wanderloots ✨
@wanderloots.eth
Introducing: Read Write Earn (Own): my first contest to inspire feedback on my writing ✨ READ my post WRITE a comment👇 (quote/feedback/thoughts) EARN $degen (I'll tip my top 10, 500) OWN by minting (optional, bonus tips while I can✨) https://paragraph.xyz/@wanderloots.eth/worldbuilding?referrer=wanderloots.eth
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bradq
@bradq
I like how you've framed this new chapter in your journey-caught my attention. Couple friendly suggestions (I assume you want real input 😀) Would love a tl;dr at the beginning with some clarity & punch that made me want to read more. Would help reading if you connected the thread of thinking as we go. Not criticism.
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Callum Wanderloots ✨
@wanderloots.eth
Amazing! Appreciate you letting me know the attention-grab, that's the biggest difficulty with writing 😊 Yes! Always looking for real input, that's how I recalibrate 🧭 didn't take it as criticism at all Good to know, I'll work on clearer tl;drs next time. Can you elaborate on the thread of thinking? 500 $degen
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bradq
@bradq
FYI, The attention catching was R, W, E, O and the connection to steps in your writing. That made me read it.
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bradq
@bradq
You have lived w/ the topic, ideas, & connections. We are coming in cold. So, you will tend to leave out a lot that connects the flow of the "argument" and transitioning. Get into our thinking & be a tour guide for us. Tour guides say things that are obvious to them but make the exp. for the guest more enjoyable. Help?
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