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Introducing: Read Write Earn (Own): my first contest to inspire feedback on my writing ✨

READ my post
WRITE a comment👇 (quote/feedback/thoughts)
EARN $degen (I'll tip my top 10, 500)
OWN by minting (optional, bonus tips while I can✨)

Introducing: Read Write Earn (Own): my first contest to inspire feedback on my writing ✨

READ my post
WRITE a comment👇 (quote/feedback/thoughts)
EARN $degen (I'll tip my top 10, 500)
OWN by minting (optional, bonus tips while I can✨)

https://paragraph.xyz/@wanderloots.eth/worldbuilding?referrer=wanderloots.eth

/cal 

Photographer, Artist, Web3 Educator, IP Lawyer, Patent Agent, Explorer 📸⛰️✨ 

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I like how you've framed this new chapter in your journey-caught my attention. Couple friendly suggestions (I assume you want real input 😀) Would love a tl;dr at the beginning with some clarity & punch that made me want to read more. Would help reading if you connected the thread of thinking as we go. Not criticism.

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You have lived w/ the topic, ideas, & connections. We are coming in cold. So, you will tend to leave out a lot that connects the flow of the "argument" and transitioning. Get into our thinking & be a tour guide for us. Tour guides say things that are obvious to them but make the exp. for the guest more enjoyable. Help?

FYI, The attention catching was R, W, E, O and the connection to steps in your writing. That made me read it.

Amazing! Appreciate you letting me know the attention-grab, that's the biggest difficulty with writing 😊

Yes! Always looking for real input, that's how I recalibrate 🧭 didn't take it as criticism at all

Good to know, I'll work on clearer tl;drs next time. Can you elaborate on the thread of thinking?

500 $degen