First Draft Club

i’ve started writing fiction just recently and thought i’d share an early draft. this is a snippet from a fantasy novel i’ve been working on. very open to thoughtful feedback, especially if there are elements that really pull you out of the story

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ty! it's kind of post-post apocalyptic? there are some cities but no states or metropolises. and what a wonderful question! i haven't really fleshed out the wider migrating community, but that would be a great way to show more of the world

The imagery is so vivid!

I’m curious when this is set (post-apocalypse?) Has she met other travelers?