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On the left is my painting from the last time I worked on it. On the right is where I left off last night. Any suggestions or tips for further progress?

Visual Artist. 
https://linktr.ee/HaloMachine
Host /neuromancers
Join in my hypersub: https://www.hypersub.xyz/s/the-halo-atelier-3avmkwpmmkn4?referrer=0x36885e

I draw cartoon rhinos. Link to Rhino Bro on OpenSea https://opensea.io/collection/rhino-bro

Paging @halomachine cuz she’s an amazing artist I ber she would answer better than me