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Anyone need help with product marketing? - Messaging - Positioning - Copy - Feature feedback - Simplification/translation All free. Just want to give back to the FC community. Happy to spend an hour or two today.

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I'm open to all feedback re: jam.fans . It's my first real project and I'm not a designer or copywriter at all (and barely a coder 😂) Thanks for doing this ❤️

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No problem, taking a look now. PS, two Phish members went to my high school :)

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Okay so trying to dig in here - what is my end use of the product? What happens when I add a Jam? I went through the process but it’s unclear where that Jam was added to. Why are these different from listening on Spotify?

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Do you end up with a list of live Jam sets by these epic jam bands? And then you can share those lists of sets, as seen on in YouTube videos? It seems like it could be cool, but I’m not sure what I should have as my reward at the end of using it yet.

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Answering these questions via your copy and design decisions could be useful. I’m also happy to help if you can provide more context.

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Thanks again for the feedback, I updated the copy to make the end-use more clear: https://www.jam.fans/ This is why it's so good to get fresh eyes on stuff, I was blind to how unclear that was (but now I see!). Better now?

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Glad to be helpful, and that’s definitely better! Give me a few and I think I can help even more

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Thanks so much! Absolutely all feedback welcome. Very grateful to have another brain on this ❤️

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Okay, here’s what I would do. I made a little mock up to help

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I would update the landing page to be more focused on one core value proposition. In this case, I think using your tool to find live jams is the biggest draw. Then, I would introduce the clear CTA of “Add to Jam.fans public collection” somewhere during that search process.

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Great points! When you say "during that search process," were you thinking on the slide out?

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Okay I’m understanding this a bit better. When I arrive in the site, all I want to do is find rare jams - whether they’re the ones on the site or that still need to be pulled from setlist. So there should (ideally) be one search function that let’s me find those jams.

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