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tomu
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i will give out my total $degen allowance today for honest feedback on my latest article. What should I improve? https://paragraph.xyz/@tomu/it-pays-to-be-onchain
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Honestly, this article is really good, and even though I already knew a lot of the stuff you mentioned (thanks to you haha), there are two things I think will help a reader to stay hooked till the end (because I often find myself drifting off when reading other newsletters and articles):
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- Show examples. Even if it makes the article longer, it would be interesting to see a couple of cases of artists who have taken advantage of this new way of monetizing their work and connecting with their community.
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Not only because it will make the article more enjoyable, but because I love finding alpha in these types of articles. For instance, I'd love to know which Hypersub subscriptions you're subscribed to.
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- Show examples applicable to brands/products that haven't made the leap to web3 yet. I think the article is great for people who understand or have been interested in web3, but I know (from my experience) that people with certain power in big companies and brands would love to come across your article.
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ae 🎩🔵
@ae81
Make it accessible, relatable. You might get subscribers and even clients.
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