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i will give out my total $degen allowance today for honest feedback on my latest article. What should I improve?

i will give out my total $degen allowance today for honest feedback on my latest article. What should I improve?

https://paragraph.xyz/@tomu/it-pays-to-be-onchain

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If you gonna be a degen, be a good degen 🫡✨

nothing, very well thought and written!!! wowow 🫡 My only suggestion would be an extra tldr version with the highlights of the article.
Very nice work, 300 $degen

Honestly, this article is really good, and even though I already knew a lot of the stuff you mentioned (thanks to you haha), there are two things I think will help a reader to stay hooked till the end (because I often find myself drifting off when reading other newsletters and articles):

Even though I'm familiar with most of the concepts outlined in here - this was a very cool summary on what being onchain means atm! No easy task.

Here's what I loved:
+ Excellent choice of title
+ Effective use of pictures for clarity
+ Clear breakdown of different parts/mechanisms

I read through your article. To be honest, it's an amazing piece.

I summarize as thus:

It discusses the evolution of engagement on social media platforms, from the introduction of the Like button to the current trend of onchain content collection in web3.