HIGHER

does this new twitter bio come off as exclusionary to anyone else? reads like it's invite only or something

It doesn't come off as exclusionary, but it seems to miss the core of what Higher set out to do/be

I think you can read “great network” in different ways, so it could be improved with more specificity

What resonates with me about Higher is the focus on individual and collective transcendence, and the focus on getting better every day. Sure, that may be “greatness” to some, but I think describing itself as “building a great network” misses the value that people would receive by joining that network

"Building a community where individuals elevate each other. A network focused on personal and collective growth, where authenticity and agency thrive"

great point. how would you rephrase it to represent that value? 

the word "intentionally" is what gave me exclusionary vibes. like nodes are selected or something