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politely asking if you want my edit
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@unbias
Yeah bro these aren't me thinking im good its just obvious that practicing and piecing together bars later is mostly how its done
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@shoni.eth
Cc @king
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i noticed rappers rarely bother adding pronouns and conjunctions, lil wayne is notorious, even kendrick is doing it, although some remain (for a better flow): Every missed chance turned missed dance; she asked me why I'm faded, the blade cut me serrated. I guess they thought film was PG, defiance stemmed from parental guidance -- skipped over, I flipped it over. Every verse, car in reverse- tell you I'm cursed, kinda curse, you first to the hearse. Driven hundred Range Rovers, looking for the leaf clover <assuming the listener already knows leaf clover means four-leaf>. no help for us; your helpers forty-plus. The words engineered, but path carved never cleared. forever clear, it burns like everclear. magic focus pills felt like circus thrill, little wiser now, bloodshot eyes tell no lies, just enterprise-- they wrapped coke in bright orange coat
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@shoni.eth
"looking for the leaf clover" this was hard~! the rest makes sense i'll have to read some lyrics and see. it will come out in the singing style
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yea this one was a tongue twister when i re-read it, could have been better without the the, just looking for leaf clover.
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@shoni.eth
still singing style. my influence is via mac which means there are two many words but things like "true many birds is too many words"
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