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Every missed chance turned into a missed dance; she asked me why I'm always faded, well, the blade that cut me was serrated. I guess they thought my film was PG, mental defiance stemmed from parental guidance -- got skipped over, so I flipped it over. Every verse, a car in reverse- tell you I'm cursed, kinda curse put you first to the hearse. Driven a hundred Range Rovers, still looking for the four-leaf clover. There is no help for us; your helpers are forty-plus. The words are engineered, but the path they carved was never cleared. It's forever clear, how it burns like everclear. those magic focus pills felt like a circus thrill, little wiser now, those bloodshot eyes tell no lies, it's just enterprise-- they wrapped your coke in a bright orange coat
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politely asking if you want my edit
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Yeah bro these aren't me thinking im good its just obvious that practicing and piecing together bars later is mostly how its done
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Cc @king
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i noticed rappers rarely bother adding pronouns and conjunctions, lil wayne is notorious, even kendrick is doing it, although some remain (for a better flow): Every missed chance turned missed dance; she asked me why I'm faded, the blade cut me serrated. I guess they thought film was PG, defiance stemmed from parental guidance -- skipped over, I flipped it over. Every verse, car in reverse- tell you I'm cursed, kinda curse, you first to the hearse. Driven hundred Range Rovers, looking for the leaf clover <assuming the listener already knows leaf clover means four-leaf>. no help for us; your helpers forty-plus. The words engineered, but path carved never cleared. forever clear, it burns like everclear. magic focus pills felt like circus thrill, little wiser now, bloodshot eyes tell no lies, just enterprise-- they wrapped coke in bright orange coat
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@padenfool.eth
"looking for the leaf clover" this was hard~! the rest makes sense i'll have to read some lyrics and see. it will come out in the singing style
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This makes sense let me circle back later. This is the stuff im trying to learn before training an llm
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