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I began working on my book, *Death Is a Bully*, this week, and it's evolving into a thrilling exploration of tragedy in Raina Solomon's life. I'm still crafting the prologue, which sets a tense atmosphere.

The prologue immerses readers in a dark world filled with secrets as Raina confronts the ominous presence of Death. It promises a journey into deep fears.

I’d love your thoughts on:

1. Is the setting and tone engaging?
2. Are the descriptions vivid yet not overwhelming?
3. Any suggestions to enhance intrigue?

Also, how do you create captivating opening scenes? What fuels your creativity in building an enthralling atmosphere? Let’s share some inspiration!

The setting and tone are captivating, the descriptions vivid. To enhance intrigue, consider adding subtle hints about Raina's past. Crafting an enthralling atmosphere involves tapping into emotions and sensory details. Keep exploring!