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@decentral-think
Here's the daily life of the Sleepers, after The Nightmare Fuel. A very personal vision that surely deviates a bit from the original vision of the work Thanks @pifours.eth for this wonderful contest https://paragraph.xyz/@0xd170707ffb9e3acda65bfe42e98c2639928cf6e0/a-second-for-a-lifetime-the-daily-lives-of-sleepers
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Vladimir M
@mea-culpa
Here I am - your friendly morpheus world-builder the work is super good, and I would like to share thoughts, which may be useful for all morphs here - to empower your creative skills 1. I'm wondering if you used the AI for text - some of the constructions made me think so. If not - I salute you for the style
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Vladimir M
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I use a lot of complicated word construction to create this viscosity of story - inspired by Lovecraft and Poe - but every text is hand written. 2. I suppose you used --sref tool for the pics, let me know if so - anyway it looks so good, consistency of the style is the main thing to achieve, if you use the AI for pics
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Vladimir M
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3. as I said - I love consistency, but at the same time, I agree to disagree with the topics you use. You did the complete story, like a review of the current life state, but is it everyday life? It's kinda discussable. But again - I love the completeness of this work
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Vladimir M
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4. Here is the message for creators from the community - we can build head canon together, cus there will be more and more story, so I want to encourage you to use more of staples from existing stories. Feel free to think about your morph - what is she/he doing in everyday life? How it can be connected to the story
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Vladimir M
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Finalizing this feedback - I want to announce that I will pick the additional winners of the contest by myself and share some super strong creativity and storytelling material with you. Goodnight, let's build it
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@decentral-think
Thank you for your comprehensive feedback! It's really nice to have genuine input. I mostly did it for fun without really adhering to the exercise (guilty as charged). Honestly, I don't think this work deserves to be considered because it's quite disconnected and not very well-structured.
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Vladimir M
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always welcome! stop it, lol as I said - it's a great work first of all, that's why I decided to discuss it here in such details
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