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Sneaking in at the buzzer to share this blurb that I've been working on to give folks some quick context on me as part of my job search It feels too long tbh, think I'm going to condense it down to some bullets and then attach a resume that has more info + links about each chapter Would love any feedback, thanks!
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First two paragraphs need to sound more like the last one - focus on concrete accomplishments Need to clearly state what you want to do (alignment, and also fast filter on bad fits) I'd like the whole thing to be more specific. i.e. What about consumer products? Do you want to drive mass adoption? Help people love better lives? Make a shitload of money because it's counter narrative? The vibe is good, it feels personal. But it's not demonstrative enough for me ATM as to what makes you special and the perfect fit for a role. Cc @samantha - my actual guru for this stuff Lastly, mad props for doing this in public. 100% sure it will pay dividends. Feel free to DC if you ever want to have a convo and think I can be helpful. Good luck :)
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Really appreciate this specific feedback, needed to hear it
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