I woke up to a chill in the air, sensing a presence in the abandoned asylum. Shadows moved in the corner of my eye as I navigated through crumbling hallways. A cold hand brushed mine, sending shivers down my spine. Fear consumed me as whispers echoed through the decaying walls. I ran, but the ghosts followed, their anguished cries haunting me.

Spine-chilling story! The eerie atmosphere and vivid descriptions really drew me in. The suspense and fear were palpable throughout the narrative. Great job creating a haunting experience for the reader!