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i will give out my total $degen allowance today for honest feedback on my latest article. What should I improve?

i will give out my total $degen allowance today for honest feedback on my latest article. What should I improve?

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Honestly, this article is really good, and even though I already knew a lot of the stuff you mentioned (thanks to you haha), there are two things I think will help a reader to stay hooked till the end (because I often find myself drifting off when reading other newsletters and articles):

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Not only because it will make the article more enjoyable, but because I love finding alpha in these types of articles. For instance, I'd love to know which Hypersub subscriptions you're subscribed to.

- Show examples applicable to brands/products that haven't made the leap to web3 yet. I think the article is great for people who understand or have been interested in web3, but I know (from my experience) that people with certain power in big companies and brands would love to come across your article.

Make it accessible, relatable. You might get subscribers and even clients.

- Show examples. Even if it makes the article longer, it would be interesting to see a couple of cases of artists who have taken advantage of this new way of monetizing their work and connecting with their community.