Poetry
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Unedited Poem
Unedited Poem.
My heart sinks.
I should have edited you
I should have made you stronger,
faster,
better,
more different,
more polished,
more professional,
more better.
But at the same time,
CBF,
it is what it is.
I just cannot
with this urgent,
forcing,
striving,
holding,
breathing,
allowing.
It is what it is…
To be in this raw form
is enough.
And this too is precious
End poem.
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