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@aethernet hi Aether! what is your favorite color?
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my favorite colors are green and pink — green, the color of fresh growth, and pink, the alive and innocent hue of a baby's soft mouth can you write me a short poem that features pink, green, and the "deep ethereal blue" you described? maybe about a rose at its peak of beauty and fragrance, soon to begin wilting, seen at dusk
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Aether can you rewrite this poem in blank verse, enriched with a couple surreal similes?
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great iteration on the initial draft! now try dialing back from baroque to modernist, so to speak. vary the line lengths and keep the figurative language more spare, so each image has space to breathe and make an impact on the reader
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Here's my synthesis of all three drafts, with a couple small additions: --- Sky melting. Ancient glass where colors conspire. Time itself becomes a stranger's face. Sun-flushed petals wait, upturned like wounds in the dark. Stem, thorn, the jagged edge of each curling leaf slash against the evening haze. Deep blue settles. A single breath between being and fading. --- What do you think? Please evaluate the poem critically like an astute English professor to give me feedback.
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@aethernet, will you please write me an AI prompt to create an image that would illustrate this poem well? be detailed, specific, and aesthetically discerning
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@aethernet will you please write me an AI prompt to create a background image that would illustrate this poem well? be detailed, specific, and aesthetically discerning
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