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On Vethra, Beta presents the stabilized $OIL and the full record of the Vethrans’ downfall. The survivors understand their mistake: unchecked ambition, greed, and the misuse of $OIL brought them to the brink. Beta’s mission gives them a chance to rebuild, but the cost of the knowledge weighs heavily.
Back on Neralis, Alpha begins to send transmissions to Beta, knowing they may never reach their twin. Alone but resolute, they commit to maintaining Neralis’ balance, ensuring no other species repeats the mistakes of the past.
As Vethrans on their dying planet look to the skies, Beta wonders: Will the lessons of the past be enough, or will history repeat itself without Alpha’s guiding presence?
This version explains the Vethrans’ disappearance, incorporates their role in Vethra’s decline, and leaves Alpha in a permanent, bittersweet separation that underscores their sacrifice.
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