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a hidden quick way to improve your first draft: move the last paragraph of your essay to the first. i've spotted this pattern in hundreds of students' essays: the clearest thesis is found at the very end. why is that?

a hidden quick way to improve your first draft: move the last paragraph of your essay to the first. i've spotted this pattern in hundreds of students' essays: the clearest thesis is found at the very end. why is that?

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write the article starting at whatever point you can. then when you're done, go back and write the thesis for the article you actually wrote instead of what you were trying to write

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There's 3 articles.

The article you meant to write
The article you wrote
The article you came up with afterwards

yeahhhhhh *stares at messy apple notes pile*