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** Crash Course in better engagement, leaderboard rewards, & finding your place on FC ** I've been sharing the same posts w/ people who are asking & new people so figured I'd put them in one cast that anyone can share Read these, compare with your current practices, & see where you can improve...and be patient! It may not change in a week. @pichi UnWritten Rules of FC https://warpcast.com/pichi/0x2279a5d6 @bertwurst.eth How To Succeed on FC (don't be fooled by the dog) https://warpcast.com/bertwurst.eth/0xd212fc7a @dwr.eth How To Improve Your Leaderboard Status https://warpcast.com/dwr.eth/0x75c4bcd5 @ted Quick Take Advice on Casting https://warpcast.com/ted/0x686b5d5a @bradq Finding Your Place on FC https://warpcast.com/bradq/0xca839588 @bradq Underrated Ways To Be A Good Farcaster https://warpcast.com/bradq/0x2b78deec

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Mooooossseee! Did he ask about me, now that he knows me?

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I look forward to reading 👊

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FarCon Highlights: 🫵Internet friends are awesome 📱Consumer crypto is here, s/o Blackbird, Alexandria Books, Coinbase Wallet and Warpcast , 💜One thing we ALL agree on: the awesomeness of Fred Wilson 🏆I won a hackathon prize, yay 🚀Farcaster is gonna make it Full write up: https://paragraph.com/@adrienne/url-to-irl-my-farcon-recap

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Looks like a lot more adj in first half. Where it's not adjectives it may be extra words and could use some concision to make it flow 👊

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@uncle just want to make sure you saw this follow up too ⬆️

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def not gabagool

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no interest in being discourgaging just trying to be honest and helpful. Let me know if you have questions or need more clarification. 👊

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So, I don't know you or how much you write or what this is, so bear that in mind. I write a lot and like to read and evaluate like this. I always look for phrases or sentences that hit right and stand out in terms of flow and clarity. Here 3 I noted: He’d learned not to ask questions after midnight. To a man like Mr. F, debt was better than money. Then – life. The cursor blinked. Data flooded in like a torrent. My two big notes: 1. You seem to do a lot of description, some of which may be important, some of which is almost certainly not. Lots of adjectives which is often taboo for writing unless you have a very clear reason and can make it work. It feels like you are working real hard to put us in the scene, which is great and admirable, but I think the descriptions and adjectives are actually working against it. 2. And this relates to #1. It doesn't flow real well. It's choppy. I can't get the rhythm of the story and the action. I think some sentences need to be more striaghtfoward and obvious.

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met gala - this is the big leagues

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I'd like to see a little more color and hair up under the hat is a faux pas

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see first comment ..it's not me

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so happy to hear that 💜

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context: https://warpcast.com/esteez.eth/0xbb51106c

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post a picture of yourself to prove you're not another gabgool alt.

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