Colin Johnson 💭
@cojo.eth
Finally published a personal website! It took ~5 hours w/ Squarespace and was relatively painless. I’d love feedback (especially critical) if anyone’s got expertise/thoughts 🤌 https://colinjohnson.io
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bradq
@bradq
I like the simple and clean look. Overall feel is great. I love the banner image, but it's a little strange that it seems like a 15-year-old kid...probably nothing you can do about that, but I love the actual stuff in the image and the look... I have 3 suggestions...
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Murdo
@murdo
If you’re doing suggestions-as-a-service, I’d love your feedback on mine: https://murdo.xyz/
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bradq
@bradq
I assume there's a reason you are going with no visuals. I think it needs a visual, but leaving that aside....I think you need a killer line to open up your bio. Your opening paragraph is vague and won't supply that killer line. What's makes you and your work different from everyone else?
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bradq
@bradq
I've created (insert best, unique thing you did at KPMG), (1 unique thing you did in the "dabble", and Wall Street's best IOS stickers. Then Scotland...family...dogs line Then get rid of IOS sticker here and create a new paragraph that better elaborates what you do in vivid, clear words, phrases, sentences.
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bradq
@bradq
[Currently I have no idea what you do or what you could do for me or anyone else, except IOS stickers] Your speaking links are broken. I didn't read the work page but looks better and seems to explain a bit better than front page.
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